Archive for March, 2010

Honing Your Craft

Intelligent writers understand the need to continually hone their craft. It doesn’t matter how many books they’ve had published or how many awards they’ve won. The fact is, intelligent writers don’t rest on their laurels. They continually try to do better.

Writers will have a chance to learn how to do better at the 12th annual Love Is Murder Con being held February 4-6, 2011 in Chicago. Multi-published authors Carolyn Haines and Joan Johnson will share their wisdom and knowledge of the writing business in two multi-hour long master classes.

Joan Johnson has forty-six published novels to her credit. Joan will discuss how suspense and romantic suspense writers can create a multi-book “family series” similar to a series on TV, so readers will come back again and again for the next book–to find out what murder, romance and mayhem occur with the black sheep, the sexy older brother, the misfit, the spoiled daughter, the parents, the ex-wife, etc. etc.

Carolyn Haines says that in three decades of writing, almost everything she’s learned has arrived after much suffering. There are some basic things that can speed a writer along the path to publication or better structured stories. Most books are rejected because of plot or structure failure. By answering a few questions, a writer can shape the story in ways that avoid sagging middles and plot confusion. She’ll discuss these questions and how to apply them. Had someone told me these basic things, she says she would probably have been too hard-headed to listen, but had she listened, she would have saved herself a number of rejections.

You can learn more about these classes at www.loveismurder.net.

Where do fads go to die?

Webster’s defines “fad” as “a custom or style … that many people are interested in for a short period of time; craze.”
There has been no shortage of fads in America’s history, each one a unique “sign of the times.”
But as quickly as they flashed onto the scene these short-lived, all-consuming phenomena departed back into the unknown depths of the creator’s consciousness. Some fads, however, maintained their role in society, though not with the same feverish extent as at their original inception.
Dead fads
In 1924 a man named Alvin “Shipwreck” Kelly sat on the top of a flagpole as part of a dare. Little did he know his stunt would soon become a nationwide spectator sport. The Great Depression, however, killed off this fad.
Twenty-five South African students claimed they set a world record in the 1950s when they stuffed themselves into a telephone booth. Not to be outdone, American college students on the West Coast attempted similar stunts. This fad died in 1959 but later returned as “VW stuffing.”
In the 1970s Philadelphia was known for more than just rowdy sport fans. All-pro Eagles linebacker Tim Rossovich proved silicon is part of a balanced diet when he started snacking on beer mugs and light bulbs. This fad later caught with a more “intelligent” crowd as a sophomore student at Harvard University added light bulbs to his dinner menu. School officials didn’t approve, however, and quickly ended this need to eat glass.
Still around fads
First called “Garden Golf” because of its new location, miniature golf was originally played as a short game of regulation golf in the early 1900s. Twenty years later the playing surface changed from real grass and “rails” or “bumpers” were added. By the 1930s there were more than 30,000 links throughout the country, with 150 alone on the rooftops of New York City.
In the 1940s the slinky first climbed its way into American homes. It was invented by Richard James of (where else?) Philadelphia and was originally made from metal.
In 1973 the U.K. was forever changed by the musical “Rocky Horror Picture Show.” This bizarre story then made its way to the U.S. After becoming a movie it was deemed to be screened “only” at midnight, which helped to spawn the popularity of midnight movies and turned this feature into an instant cult classic.
A few of these crazes have been known to regain their former “fad” status, such as acupuncture (President Nixon’s contribution from a visit to China in 1971) or cartoon characters of the 1980s (like the Care Bears and Strawberry Shortcake). But many fads live up to Webster’s definition instead of their supporters’ expectations.
Personally, I’d like to see some of the dead fads revived.
I mean, if streaking and gold fish eating have survived the test of time why not flagpole sitting?

A tidbit from Katie Pasek, author of “Sure-foot Sam in Jeopardy.”
For more information about Katie or Sure-foot, please visit http://www.katiepasek.com

How Do You work?

When talking to a friend recently, I mentioned that I’d found some interesting information of some topic while I was taking a break from working.

This led him to ask just how much time do I work before I allow myself to take a break. And I had no idea how to answer him. Which led me to do a lot of soul searching.
Was I disciplined enough? Did I spend enough time at the keyboard, staring at the screen? Just exactly how did I do the work?

I’ve always thought that I had a “system” of sorts. And that this system worked. And, I suppose that mostly it has. But lately I’ve been wanting to find shortcuts, to produce more, to take fewer breaks.

My system, at least as I’ve come to think of it, puts a lot of emphasis on thinking through a project before setting much down on paper. I’ve always been of the opinion that allowing an idea to percolate or simmer on a back burner was ideal. Let the unconscious do some of the preliminary work or solve some of the thornier problems. Sometimes knotty issues get worked out. Sometimes entire new approaches are born. Even new ideas can come from this simmer process.

But at some point, you’ve got to stop simmering and bring things to a boil. You’ve got to get the work on paper (or on screen and eventually on paper or whatever). At some point you’ve got to know that you’ve thought it through and it’s time to produce.

The flaw in the “think it through” system, which I’ve been on guard about (so it’s not a runaway flaw) is that you can actually convince yourself that you’re thinking about a project when in effect you’re just playing hooky.

When my friend asked how much time I spent writing between breaks, I coldn’t answer. I’d never times myself. I do know that sometimes I take too many breaks, but often it’s because I’m having difficulty finding a way out of the corner I’ve painted myself into.

So, what’s your method? How do you approach writing? And, do you have a way to write faster and not allow the quality to degrade?

Saturdays and Shorts

Just writing this post – in anticipation of this coming Saturday has the “Saturday Night’s Alright” song by Elton John roaring through my head. Even though this is a post about Saturday mornings. (it’s just that quirky  inspiration thing writers often run into.

Unfortunately I can only remember the tune and the chorus, so I’ll just keep it in my head rather than offend Elton and the rest of the world with my brief and repetitive impersonation.

But Saturdays – when it’s not hockey season – give me the rare opportunity to sleep in – at least a little.

It’s bliss! Sometimes Saturday bliss is even better because I can hide out, convincing the greyhounds I’m still asleep while reading a story on the palm I use for an alarm clock.

Even better when it’s a short story! I can get through the whole thing, be it a romance or mystery before the greyhounds uncover my sneakiness and demand my services like opening the back door and filling the food bowls.

During hockey season, short stories are best for Saturdays, feeding my need to read between games or during the seemingly endless time it takes for my son to emerge from the locker room.

Shorts are a treat I apply liberally to any Saturday!

Of course because Saturdays are often busy, it’s a great time for me to write shorts too – a phenomenon that often happens on, yup  -you guessed it!

Saturday Night!

I’ve written ghost stories, the young adult Hobbitville series and even some of my futuristic shorts on Saturday nights.

It’s easiest to find and BUY my Saturday     night efforts on Echelon Press or even the Kindle store!

Happy reading!

Regan

Keep up with Regan’s writing and greyhounds at her website, or follow her progress through writer’s resource book, The Fire In Fiction by literary agent Donald Maass at the Beyond Words On The Page blog.


New Zealand Author’s Book Launch to draw South Africans

A book launch by Yvonne Eve Walus, internationally acclaimed author of ‘Murder @ Work‘ and  ’Murder @ Play’, is likely to draw crowds of South African ex-pats because of its Pretoria setting in the politically challenging period of mid-1990s.

The North Shore City author is launching the second in a series of cosy murder mysteries on Friday 23 April 2010, 5.30-7pm.

Yvonne Walus will be in East Coast Bays Library (8 Bute Rd, Browns Bay, Auckland), to launch ‘Murder @ Play’.

It features her amateur detective Dr Christine Chamberlain whose fun weekend at a friend’s opulent mansion turns into a logical puzzle of who-dun-it, with her husband the prime suspect. Christine must use her brilliant mathematical mind to prove her husband’s innocence… whether he’s innocent or not.

Murder @ Play’ is published by Echelon Press in USA.

Says Walus, “The 1990s were a fascinating time in South African history: new thinking challenging old beliefs, the media slowly hinting at the possibility of equality for all people, hope and goodwill rising despite the escalating violence. The whites still had a cushy lifestyle: secure jobs for the men, large mansions with swimming pools for the women (many women chose to stay at home and look after the family with the help of their domestic servants). The non-whites still vacuumed the thick carpets and polished the silver BMWs at work, then went home to mud shacks. But the changes – the changes were already afoot….
A quick tourist guide to South Africa in the 1990s:

  • When you go to a doctor or dentist, don’t take your wallet. The bill will be sent to your home address… but if you’re a woman, the bill will be addressed to your father or your husband. Women don’t trouble their pretty little heads with bills.
  • If you’re a woman, expect to be stopped at the door to an alcohol bar: that place is for men only, and your husband is welcome to go in while you wait for him in the street.
  • Even if you are a career woman earning more than your husband does, you will need his signature when opening a credit account in a supermarket or a department store.
  • If you’re a man, the size of your manhood is directly proportional to the size of your gun.
  • Gambling is illegal.
  • Sex with a person of another race has only just been made legal. The Group Areas Act, however, is still in force, preventing people of different races from living in the same suburb.
  • Your car costs half as much as your mansion.
  • This year, you will pay more for a security fence than you pay for your daily house cleaning.

Yvonne Walus is also author to several Echelon Press shorts, including:

Let’s Get It Started!

While I was teaching my most recent class on writing basics I mentioned the importance of the first line of a novel. Today’s readers expect a writer to hook them fast and keep their attention. I spend a lot of time agonizing over the first sentence of a book and I know a lot of other writers who do the same. But when questioned, I was hard put to clearly define what a good lead sentence is or how to create one. What will let the reader know what kind of book to expect, create suspense that draws them in, yet doesn’t leave them feeling lost and confused?

In my on line search for enlightenment I came upon an entire web site dedicated to first lines. The Opening Lines section of Wikiquote – http://en.wikiquote.org/wiki/Opening_lines – is almost a class in itself, an extensive lesson on how to grab the reader at the start of your book. The lines are laid out alphabetically by book title and just in the A section I found great examples of opening with humor:

Dirk Moeller didn’t know if he could fart his way into a major diplomatic incident. But he was ready to find out.
The Android’s Dream by John Scalzi

Profound, thought provoking starts:

All happy families are alike; each unhappy family is unhappy in its own way.
Anna Karenina by Leo Tolstoy

And beginnings that tell you what the whole book will hinge on:

Who is John Galt?
Atlas Shrugged by Ayn Rand

I’ll admit that I’m also partial to openings that make you want to know why:

Ten days after the war ended, my sister Laura drove a car off a bridge.
The Blind Assassin by Margaret Atwood

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I was surprised to see just how many of these familiar books opened with a description of the weather, something I’ve been told is a bad idea. Of course the most famous bad writing example starts there: “It was a dark and stormy night.”

Anyway, I found the pages to be a fun read, and I think others who enjoy short works might enjoy trolling thru these opening lines and if they work, you might be looking up the books too.

BTW, I am particularly proud of the opening line for my short story, You can BUY “A Little Wildness” by clicking the title.

Sometimes Hannibal thought he could actually hear trouble coming.

I hope it convinces others to check that little story out at Echelon Shorts.

Beautiful brevity

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To hear me speak, you’d never guess I write short stories.

To put it plainly, I tend to r-a-m-b-l-e on and on, on par with an Ent during a government session (or maybe worse). I admit it: I have trouble getting to the point of things when I talk. I blame it on my creative brain, always jumping from one topic to the next, or off lollygagging about on some side tangent when I’m supposed to be focusing…

Yeah.

But in writing, I can edit. In writing, I can pick my words before they are put on the page, pick them carefully before they get seen by any reader. I can write my sentences, and listen to them a time or two (or three) before they’re put out there for the world to see.

I, who talks in a series of run-on sentences and who sandwiches unrelated clauses into one monster speech, can be brief.

I can be concise.

I can take all the noise in my head and boil it down into a thing of trim beauty and clean lines.

“To see the world in a grain of sand…” (William Blake)

~*~

Heather S. Ingemar has loved to play with words since she was little, and it wasn’t long until she started writing her own stories. Termed “a little odd” by her peers, she took great delight in exploring tales with a gothic flair, and to this day, Edgar Allan Poe continues to be her literary hero. To learn more, please visit: http://ingemarwrites.wordpress.com/ or follow her on Twitter: http://twitter.com/heatheringemar

Buy a story (or two or three): Heather Ingemar on Echelon Direct

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